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Eric Alagan, family, Malaya, micro fiction, poetry, Singapore, Stories, writing, WW II
Whenever soldiers trudged through the rubber plantations, Siva would run after the men, calling – “Johnny” or “Tommy”.
Then the Japanese brought the war to Malaya and many Australian stragglers took refuge in the jungles. They crept out to scavenge food from the locals.
Siva persuaded his mother, Neela Kanni, to spare whatever they could from their meagre store. Late at night, he would pick his way to the jungle fringe and leave baked tapioca wrapped in banana leaves. One morning, a scrap of paper held down by a stone, greeted him - “Thanks mate!” With a broad smile, Siva ran home with the treasured gift held close to his heart.
About two weeks later, sharp raps on the door startled the household. It was five in the morning. Siva’s father opened the door to four Sikh policemen, who emerged from the ghostly fog. They were apologetic but had come for Siva and his father – on Japanese demands.
Trembling with fear, Neela Kanni bade her life and soul good bye and sent them into the dark. At daybreak, she hurried to the police cantonment. Seeking out a familiar face, she beseeched the tall Sikh. His eyes wet, it was outside his control, was all he could say. Her husband had been beaten and bundled off in a truck headed north to build the “Siam” railway.
“My son, kind sir, what about my Siva,” she pleaded, her lips quivering fear.
“The Japanese hold the boy,” whispered the Sikh. “But fear not, dear mother, your son is safe…for now.”
It became a daily routine, that five-mile trudge over undulating track to the police cantonment. On some days, they released prisoners, tortured and torn. Neela Kanni would wait until the sun pulled away its light from the land. Then she would plod back, ignoring the devils along the pitch-dark track. Every morning she would set out with fresh hope, mouthing a thousand prayers for comfort and company as she approached the harsh white washed walls. Some days she heard cries escaping over the walls. Beating her chest, she would wail with the other women. Come day end, her hopes drowned, her throat raw, she would return, an empty soul to a miserable hovel.
Then one morning, there was a clamour. People ran and shouted about a rumour – the Japanese would that day release six prisoners or more.
Pulling the hem of her sari between her legs, tucking the cloth into the back of her waist, she ran, beating her chest. “Oh God, please, please, my poor son release.” She cried with no tears as her wells had long emptied. Her blouse, a sweaty second skin stuck to her flesh as she overhauled her neighbours, thinking that by being first, her son would gain preferred release.
A throng had already gathered outside the walls. Oriental men stood with tall rifles and long bayonets sticking through the iron gate. Growling dogs strained and snapped from inside, Sikh policemen stood vanguard outside. The bearded men of Punjab flayed their sticks on legs as they pushed back the pressing knot.
Pushing, shoving, scratching and screaming she broke through the crowd. A huge cloud of metallic green flies rose with an angry buzz.
With a soft cry, she sank to the ground.
There stretched on the ground were the bodies of the six, minus their heads. One was her son, she could tell by the tattoo on his forearm.
(This is based on a true story. When the Japanese beheaded him on 23rd January 1943, Siva was seventeen)
********** Copyright @ Eric Alagan, 2012 **********
Oh My God! War is war, isnt it?
What more can we say about war…
“What in a word?” to paraphrase Shakespeare; they were “released” weren’t they, at least from their misery. Such a grisly story and though very sad, it is of the kind I do not like (I mean the content, not the writing). Sadly, to kick in an open door once more, reality often surpasses fiction.
Steph xx
Dear Steph,
This is based on a true story and close to the bone.
I am also trying out a different narration style here.
Luv and hugz,
Eric
We must be careful what we ask for. It is often the question that is more important than the answer. It must take into account the effect of man’s inhumanity to man.
Love David
Dear David,
You are so very right. Sometimes we do receive that we ask.
Peace, Eric
How tragic…..
More so when you know that it is based on a true story.
Heartbreaking.
Thank you. These are cliched ‘forgotten’ heroes but nothing cliched about their deaths..
I have only sons and grandsons; something like this would ruin me forever.
Good work!
Dear Jeannie,
You are so very right. This would devastate most of us.
Peace, Eric
Very sad story, nevertheless well written one.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked my writing, Eric
Barbaric and control through fear…..grief beyond understanding….love to you Eric and for your courage in telling this tale x
Thank you Buddy Jane,
Many in the family have forgotten…that to me is a pity.
Luv and hugz, Eric
Thank you for passing on this true story to hopefully make a deeper impression on us and turn us away from war-mongering!
Thank you dear granbee,
A small group of men and women trigger wars…we the majority need to work to stop this viscious cycle in whatever way we can.
Peace, Eric
Such a sad story. I only have a daughter but I understand how much it kills a woman to lose her child. Very well written, gave me chills.
Hello dear,
You are right. It rips every parent apart to lose their child.
Thank you for the compliment on my writing.
Peace, Eric
The ache of the mother’s soul…wow, how moving this story is…I feel as though you gave us a sneek peek at a novel you’re writing about Neela Kanni and her husband, and son….with style like yours, it would be an eloquently written and hard to put down book….just sayin….
You are a perceptive one, Eva. Thank you for your welcomed compliments, Eric
A few years back I was in Thailand and visited the sites of the Burma railway, not much remains to show the horror of that time but we all should make a pilgramage to sites like these to drink in how man can be so inhumaine to man and determine to do better. While there are well kept graves tended by Western countries whose soldiers died in that hell few acknowledge the fact that multitudes of Asians were slaughtered by the occupiers and dumped in mass graves. Let us remember those souls of Asia who were so unjustly treated and acknowledge their suffering.
Dear Ian,
I never thought I would, but your comment made me pause. The character of Siva in this story is based on my maternal uncle. He is one of the “multitudes of Asians” that most historians ignore. Even official records mention only in passing – A life for a footnote, a sorry trade indeed.
I am glad that you visited those sites in Thailand/Burma…thank you.
Peace, Eric
P/s A happy note, my grandfather did escape the railway workgangs. I shall post a flash fiction about that in the not too distant future.
Gut-wrenching. I almost jumped up out of my seat.
Excellent writing Eric.
I also write of grief, but wow, can my heart take WordPress?
lol Truely I’m not going anywhere. I think I am getting a permanent lump in my throat though.
Dear Christine,
Yes, it is a sad story, all the more as it is based on true events.
Experts told me: Write from your heart, Eric and you’ll surely get it right. In this case, the experts were right.
I know your writing is better than you give yourself credit for.
All good wishes, my dear.
Eric
I love this Eric. It’s an odd thing to say because the story is horrifying – moreso being true – but this is very well written.
It’s hard on a reader because it switches from something kind of playful at the beginning, then cycles between hope and despair … and eventual tragedy. And I find myself asking why.
Thank you Kilroy for your visit and comment.
Playful…perhaps innocence of a teenager wanting to help others, only to attract grief upon himself and his loved ones. Hope and despair…that is how life plays its cards sometimes. Ultimately when it ends in tragedy, it becomes more pronounced.
My apologies if my style of storytelling is somewhat disconcerting for you, but I thought it reflected the emotions as these unfolded.
Peace, Eric
Sorry – I don’t want to go for the last word here, but I have to say:
Don’t apologize … this is great. I was more trying to figure out why it had the effect it did on me. I found myself wanting to cry at the end. Your style of storytelling does reflect the emotions very aptly. The switches (e.g. change in feeling) make the whole story much more effective.
This one breaks my petty heart into million little pieces !!
Yes, it is terrible. Many Indians who came here to work for the British, died during that war. But these are lessons well learnt – not burdens to drag around. Peace, Eric
Many horrors of war or inhumane behavior were narrated, photographed, published and read, yet many are still happening. If the stories told are so heartrending, why tread the same route – is it superiority, greed, pride, the rise in adrenalin to kill… Powerful words wielded by the author are what we hope can make the changes. My full support.
All you say is true, Jasey
Thank you for your continued encouragement.
Luv and hugz, Eric
Heartwrenching! Very well written. Keep writing so people will not forget how horrible war is.
Thank you and all of us have a part to play in spreading this message. Peace, Eric
What is most terrible about the tale is that humankind never learns from it but repeats it endlessly–only the names and specific players change. Beautifully, pitifully told.
Hello Kathryn,
You are so very right. That is human evolution for you…
Thank you for your compliments,
Eric
This is very powerful in many ways. Thank you for sharing this story from your family and bringing it to life using fiction.
Thank you Ann, for visiting and commenting. Peace, Eric
Well written. Intense! – Frank
Thank you Frank. Glad to have you visit. Peace and luv, Eric
Wow, an amazing story, and told impeccably.
Thank you Ben…even more so when you know it is based on true events.
Yeah, I’d figured that was the case – which only makes it all the more heart wrenching.
Very WELL WRITTEN –
WAR IS WAR AND BRUTAL AND SHOWS US HUMANITY AT ITS WORST …..
YOU WRITE AMAZINGLY ERIC ———–
PEACE X
CAT
YOU MAY ENJOY THIS VID OF MINE – ABOUT HUMANITY ?
GLAD I AM READING YOU ——
EXPANDING THE MIND OVER HERE – THANK YOU
Thank you Catherine.
I enjoyed the video.
Peace, Eric
WRITTEN A FEW YEARS AGO ——
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When i was full on Social Activist Cat
Now Full on ARTIST CAT